Saturday, 17 October 2009

alabalama


3 comments:

mike cannell said...

is it me, or is this more a score for a sound poem then a visual poem. i had fun sounding it anyway.

Stephen Nelson said...

Absolutely. I meant to label it as sound poetry. Must have forgotten somehow. I'll correct that.

Melissa said...

The sound and repetition was making me think Gertrude Stein. Love the shape and love the move from balm --> albatross. Yes, indeed, sometimes--yes, indeed.